There is no clear structure and emotional part here. I hear a lot of atonalities on the drop. The mixing didn't please me either. I would replace a bunch of tools on yours with some more suitable ones. It is also better to remove the line from the closed hi-hats on the drops, they are knocked out of the general audio sequence. I understand that DnB is a genre with a broken rhythm, but here it is so broken that sometimes it doesn't even hit the beat. I can't single out any rhythmic part here at all. Also, in addition to the drop, you need to add bass on the parts, because without it the synthesizers sound raw. This is all my criticism of this creation. I don't quite understand your idea. Here I would ask you to tell me exactly what you wanted to do. 6/10