Великолепная работа (как и обычно)! 10/10
Великолепная работа (как и обычно)! 10/10
Very epic and horror song! I love it. 10/10
Хм… послушал трек из описания и скажу, что похоже по стилистике. 10/10
Я кайфанул от аранжировки. Расслабляет. 10/10
У нас какая-то традиция на вокалоид? Ну ладно. :]
Круто! Как и всегда. 10/10
Скажу то же самое, что и обычно. 10/10
Well, I decided to evaluate another one of your songs.
1. 00:00 - 00:49: the beginning is quite pleasant, albeit slightly monotonous. Piano sound interesting, but there are not enough effects, SFX on the background, as well as weak basses. Yes, the sounds of nature can be heard in the background, but they are quite short and sound quite unnatural. But the mixing is not so bad. Only if you also add pads for more atmospheric, it will be better.
2. 00:49 - 01:32: more serious problems are already beginning here. Firstly, the transition to 00:49 sounds sharp and dry. Secondly, the lack of bass, pads, good mixing and volume balance. The kicks here sound too strong, and the claps are quiet. There is an empty background here, and the part itself sounds somehow empty and a little lifeless. She's probably the worst in the track.
3. 01:32 - 02:57: the transition to 01:32 is as dry as at 00:49. From 01:38 to 01:43, the sounds of nature are heard, but it is very well heard that they are not real, since they start abruptly and also end abruptly, plus they do not have even the slightest spatial processing. There are also no low frequencies here. Plus, by this point I started to get bored, because the melody on the piano is very monotonous and quickly boring. And in fact, there are the same claims here as at the beginning of the song. But I want to touch on the ending separately. Why does the melody stop so abruptly at 02:57? This is very striking to the ears.
What is the result? Not a bad idea, but a crooked implementation. Everything that worried me was voiced above. It's good that there are no out-of-sync and atonalities (there are, but they don't rush into the ears and are not even heard from the first time). Again, I am ready to forgive a lot for your inexperience. But to be honest, I even liked it to some extent. Lol. Keep developing! 7/10
Hi! I’m X-Man. I like to compose music, I draw something. Opened for collaborations.
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